Lunch Edits
On the first Wednesday of each month, at 12pm PST, I host a lunch-time Zoom to discuss all things writing- and editing-related. All word nerds welcome. Grab a bite to eat and log on.
Depending on attendance, discussions may be mediated for time, but typically it's a lively conversation with a small and collegial group. I hope to see you there!
NOTE: No Lunch Edits on September 4. See you in October!
Upcoming
LeveLs of Editing @ WRite in the harbor
LeveLs of Editing @ WRite in the harbor
LeveLs of Editing @ WRite in the harbor
Write in the Harbor — 10th Anniversary Regional Writers Conference
Saturday, November 2, 2024
Gig Harbor, WA
Levels of Editing: From Assessing Big Picture to Catching Typos
What can an editor do for you? We’ll discuss the levels of editing and the differences in editorial guidance between self-publishing and traditional publishing. What is developmental editing? Should you hire a beta reader? Is line editing the same as copy editing? What is a style guide? Let’s explore editing. All levels welcome.
two sessions @ write on the sound
LeveLs of Editing @ WRite in the harbor
LeveLs of Editing @ WRite in the harbor
2024 Write on the Sound Conference
Edmonds, WA
Friday, October 4, 1-4pm
The Essentials of Scene:
Master the Art of Immersive Writing
Saturday, October 5, 9:15-10:30am
Levels of Editing:
From the Big Picture to Catching Typos
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Levels of Editing: FROM ASSESSING THE BIG PICTURE TO CATCHING TYPOS
Levels of Editing: FROM ASSESSING THE BIG PICTURE TO CATCHING TYPOS
Levels of Editing: FROM ASSESSING THE BIG PICTURE TO CATCHING TYPOS
What can an editor do for you? We’ll discuss the levels of editing and the differences in editorial guidance between self-publishing and traditional publishing. What is developmental editing? Should you hire a beta reader? Is line editing the same as copy editing? What is a style guide? Let’s explore editing. All levels welcome.
Pacific Northwest Writers Association Conference 2024
Seattle, WA
Thursday, September 19, 2024
THE OUTLIER: ELISABETH EAVES IN CONVERSATION WITH JENNY BARTOY
Levels of Editing: FROM ASSESSING THE BIG PICTURE TO CATCHING TYPOS
Levels of Editing: FROM ASSESSING THE BIG PICTURE TO CATCHING TYPOS
Join me for a Fireside Chat at Grit City Books and a literary conversation you won't want to miss! I'll be speaking with author Elisabeth Eaves about her debut thriller novel The Outlier.
Read my profile about Eaves and this "taut, intelligent novel" in the Seattle Times.
Grit City Books
Tacoma, WA
Wednesday, September 4, 2024
VOICES OF TACOMA: The art of self-editing
Levels of Editing: FROM ASSESSING THE BIG PICTURE TO CATCHING TYPOS
How to Be an Editor: Explore the Path to an Editorial Career
Let's dive into the art of self-editing! We will discuss how to polish our work for publication. The content will apply to poets and prose writers. We will talk about finding the "through thread," tightening sentences, looking for music and rhythm, seeking and crafting pattern, adding sensory details and specificity, creating a lexicon, and more.
Tacoma Public Library, Moore Branch
Free, also on Zoom
Wednesday, November 15, 2023
How to Be an Editor: Explore the Path to an Editorial Career
How to Be an Editor: Explore the Path to an Editorial Career
How to Be an Editor: Explore the Path to an Editorial Career
What does it mean to be an editor?
Freelance editor Jenny Bartoy will explain the variety of jobs that carry this title, what skills are required for succeeding in each, and the paths you can follow to establish an editing career.
University of Puget Sound
Department of English
Monday, March 21, 2022
Show & Tell: Bring Your Story to Life
How to Be an Editor: Explore the Path to an Editorial Career
Show & Tell: Bring Your Story to Life
You've heard that old writing advice, "Show, don't tell." Come to this workshop to learn how to enrich your descriptions with specificity and sensory details, avoid information dumps, craft engaging scenes, and balance your pages. We'll discuss whether it's okay to "tell, don't show" and how to make your writing come to life and emotionally connect with your reader. Beginning and intermediate writers welcome.
Tacoma Public Library
Online and free
Tuesday, March 29, 2022
Show & Tell
How to Be an Editor: Explore the Path to an Editorial Career
Show & Tell: Bring Your Story to Life
You've heard that old writing advice, "Show, don't tell." Come to this workshop to learn how to enrich your descriptions with specificity and sensory details, avoid information dumps, craft engaging scenes, and balance your pages. We'll discuss whether it's okay to "tell, don't show" and how to make your writing come to life and emotionally connect with your reader. Beginning and intermediate writers welcome.
Creative Colloquy
Online and Free
Saturday, November 6, 2021
Structure & Outline
Structure & Outline
Structure & Outline
Whether you're a plotter or a pantser, your story needs structure. In this workshop, we'll discuss types of narrative structure, key elements and beats, and tips to keep your reader engaged. We'll go over how to outline a new project and reverse-outline an already written one to identify problems. Come with an in-progress draft or fresh ideas in any genre. Beginning and intermediate writers welcome.
Creative Colloquy
Online and Free
Monday, October 18, 2021
On Demand
Basics of Great Writing
Basics of Great Writing
Basics of Great Writing
This 1.5-hour class is targeted to professionals and academics who are not writers but have to write for their day job. In this increasingly virtual world of emails and digital content, clear communication is essential and can affect your bottom line. I will demonstrate for your team a series of effective tips and tricks to improve their writing. We'll discuss basic grammar and style guidelines and practice simple self-editing.
for pricing and scheduling.
What Is an Editor?
Basics of Great Writing
Basics of Great Writing
This 1-hour presentation is meant for students or professionals who are curious about pursuing an editorial career. I explain the variety of jobs that carry the title of "editor," what skills are required for succeeding in each, and the paths one can follow to establish an editing career. I offer a 30-minute Q&A after the presentation.
for pricing and scheduling.